Today in UOI time I would like you to assess 2 of your friend's work. You must look for:
The introductory paragraph - (rating: Well Done, Good Effort or Editing required)
- Does it have attention grabbing sentences?
- Does it explain about the report?
- Is it written in their own words or do you think that it was copied? How can you tell? Copy one of the sentences and paste it into the search bar at Google.com and hit the search button. Can you find the original? Is it the same? If it is it was copied.
- Is there a map? Is the writing in the person's own words? If you are unsure try the Google test. Is the information clear?
- Has the person included pictures? Is there an explanation? Is it in their own words?
- Did the person include a conclusion paragraph? Does it include the main points of the report?
- Is it complete? Does it have Author, (year), Title, URL and date accessed? Is it in alphabetical order?
I, (your name) have read your Religion Report and you have the following rating:
The introductory paragraph -
An explanation about the religion -
The history of the religion -
Religious symbols -
Conclusion -
Bibliography -
You can add a motivational sentence here :-)
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